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    Thinking of You

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:25 pm

    thinking of you.

    credits to hellogoodbye



    Sophie Maxwell has always been an outsider. Until she met Peter Knightsly. He had been her first love, her one and only, her everything.
    Until Peter is shot by his father, Mac. The last thing she had from him was the kisss of her life and three words-


    “I love you.”

    Then Sophie meets the new boy at school, and she doesn't know what to do, stay with her dead boyfriend, or take the words of his haunting voice, and move on?


    Chapters;
    One-The Begining
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:48 pm

    The Begining

    I blinked at the headstone in front of me.

    Peter Mark Knightsly
    July 21st, 1989 - July 21st, 2010
    Loving son, brother, and friend
    May You Sleep With The Angels


    I gulped down my sadness and pain. I loved him, he loved me, and now he was gone. "I love you.." remained in my ear for times like these.
    "I love you too," I whispered to the wind.
    Placing down the flowers I brought him, I took out my guitar.
    "From now on," I said, "Everytime I visit you I'll sing."
    I looked down at the gold heart locked tat hung around my neck. I popped it open and stared at Peter. I love you, was engraved on the back. I wiped the tears that were streaming down my cheeks and banned myself from being so stupid. Why didn't I make him tell me? I thought to myself. Why didn't he leave? Calm down, it is all over, I heard.
    "What?" I whipped around to see who was talking to me and how they knew what I was thinking.
    Hey, I heard Peter's voice.
    "Hello, Puh-puh-Peter?" I whispered.
    I'm here....
    I lost my breath for a second. All I was thinkg was, wait, I can hear Peter?
    Yeah, you can,he replied back.
    I took a deep breath in and blew it out.
    "I hafta go."
    I ran through the cemetary, pausing now and then to wipe the tears that were rushing their way out of my eyelids. I stumbled and fell over headstones untill I found my light blue Bug. I inserted the keys, took one last deep breath, and zoomed away from my pain.

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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by Kay on Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:52 pm

    i like it! =)
    reminds me a little tiny bit of i heart you, you haunt me by lisa schroeder
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:20 pm

    thanks Smile
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by Steph<3 on Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:43 pm

    Uh... this is quite similar, and almost identical to a friend's story...
    can you explain? haha.
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by Morgayne on Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:44 pm

    whose story, Steph?
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by ibelieveinfairies on Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:52 pm

    Mine.
    This was based from my one-shot,
    and I appreciate the credits but
    I'm really disappointed and hurt
    because you didn't even say that
    you liked it or anything, you just posted
    a comment saying that you were doing this.

    And I'm really sorry but I posted that as a one-shot
    for a reason. It was a one-time thing and I didn't
    want the storyline to be continued. I'm really sorry,

    but I'm just hurt..
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by AshleyBrooke on Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:33 pm

    This is just like the story 'Kissed by an angel'
    The girls boyfriend dies right after he told her he loved her
    and then he turns into an angel and he talks to his girlfriend and she can hear him.
    Also the first time he talks to her is at his grave site.
    I loved the book though, so Im sure this story will be good(:
    but im sorry to ^^^ you above me that it was yours first, Its really good your a great writter(:
    And what ever the reason was for why you wrote it, if it was something personal im sorry
    but if it was just because your a great writter, than your awesome! (: (:
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by Lucius on Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:39 pm

    No offense, but giving someone credit doesn't make it okay to post something pretty much identical to someone else's post.
    It helps, but it doesn't make it right. Your being unfair to Leslie.
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by AshleyBrooke on Wed Jul 28, 2010 3:06 am

    Hey guys I think were being a little rude. On her comment she said she would delete it if Leslie didnt want her to write all of it out. And she did ask if she could and said she was going to just post the first chapter then delete it if you didnt like it. She didnt say she was just going to write, she did ask. Im not trying mean or anything because I dont like conflict but if she wanted to write a story about it she did like it, I dont think she actually had to say for people see that.

    Like giving credits doesnt make it right,
    saying no offense, doesnt mean it wont hurt someones feelings.
    Once again im not trying to be mean to anyone, but Caitlynn is my friend, and she did ask.
    but im sure she wasnt trying to be unfair to Leslie or trying to steal something from her.
    She just thought it was a great story topic and wanted to make a story out of it. Its not like she just took the story and said was her own, she did give credit to who wrote it first.
    Im sure she might delete it now because Leslie's disappointed and didnt want it to be a story like Cait said she would when she asked.
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Wed Jul 28, 2010 4:11 pm

    okay, i think im going to delete and go with the idea i was gonna do any way. so if anyone who posted on here could delete it...thanks
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Wed Jul 28, 2010 4:11 pm

    i havta change my pic
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by claire on Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:21 pm

    god, this is just such a caitlynn thing to do.
    i'm sorry, but before you rip off anyone's story, can you at least use spell check?
    and not act like you're in "the clique", because last time i checked, this is RV, not TCM. don't bother saying that you rule your school, because honestly, i (we?) don't care.
    i know i'm going to get a lot of shit for this, but i really don't mind. (i'm feeling snarky today, sorry..)
    can you please act a little mature and at least not completely STEAL leslie's layout? picture, font, title and all.

    and don't tell the admins to delete YOUR thread, when you could just edit and put "nvm".

    and as far as i know leslie never gave permission in the first place, so i don't know where you're getting off with that.
    i know that this post is probably going to be considered pointless drama-causing, but "you KNOW you love me." as a signature? really?

    and you even copied the three word thing "I love you."

    please, this is like stephenie meyer trying to rip off j. k. r.

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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:37 pm

    thanks for that message....and harry potter isnt even that good of a series
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by claire on Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:43 pm

    you're welcome. and "harry potter isnt even that good of a series" really?
    are you really making that argument?

    lolz.
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by Lucius on Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:08 pm

    loony wrote:god, this is just such a caitlynn thing to do.
    i'm sorry, but before you rip off anyone's story, can you at least use spell check?
    and not act like you're in "the clique", because last time i checked, this is RV, not TCM. don't bother saying that you rule your school, because honestly, i (we?) don't care.
    i know i'm going to get a lot of shit for this, but i really don't mind. (i'm feeling snarky today, sorry..)
    can you please act a little mature and at least not completely STEAL leslie's layout? picture, font, title and all.

    and don't tell the admins to delete YOUR thread, when you could just edit and put "nvm".

    and as far as i know leslie never gave permission in the first place, so i don't know where you're getting off with that.
    i know that this post is probably going to be considered pointless drama-causing, but "you KNOW you love me." as a signature? really?

    and you even copied the three word thing "I love you."

    please, this is like stephenie meyer trying to rip off j. k. r.

    I love you Claire.

    caitlynn09 wrote:thanks for that message....and harry potter isnt even that good of a series

    lmao. I'm assuming you think Twilight is better written?
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by ibelieveinfairies on Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:30 pm

    Aww, ily girls so much<333
    Thank you for defendig me. :]
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 6:21 pm

    no i dont think twilight is better written, i just dont think harry potter is the best series
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by claire on Thu Jul 29, 2010 6:42 pm

    rotfl. what do you think is the best series?

    the clique?

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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by ibelieveinfairies on Thu Jul 29, 2010 10:36 pm

    lmaoo. loveyou, Claire <33
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:43 pm

    i think the clique is a good series....percy jackson I think is the best series
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by claire on Fri Jul 30, 2010 6:00 pm

    brb dying
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Fri Jul 30, 2010 6:01 pm

    i liked the 1st hp though...
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by Steph<3 on Sat Jul 31, 2010 3:38 pm

    HARRY POTTER ISN'T A GOOD SERIES!?
    You HAVE to be kidding!
    It's like, the best damn thing since "To Kill A Mocking Bird."

    Claire;; Here's an anvil to smash your skull<3
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by AshleyBrooke on Sat Jul 31, 2010 4:52 pm

    ohh I love "to kill a mocking bird" !! (:
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by IZZY on Sun Aug 01, 2010 4:21 pm

    Steph, I was passing through Alabama earlier this summer, and all I could think of was TKAMockingbird. I was freakin out : D
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by claire on Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:19 pm

    s wrote:HARRY POTTER ISN'T A GOOD SERIES!?
    You HAVE to be kidding!
    It's like, the best damn thing since "To Kill A Mocking Bird."

    Claire;; Here's an anvil to smash your skull<3

    thanks dear. <3
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:26 pm

    to kill a mockingbird was a great story.....
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:28 pm

    and twilight is gonna make sooooo much more money than hairy potter in movies
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by ibelieveinfairies on Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:44 pm

    That m'dear is false. :]
    J.K Rowling compared to Stephanie Meyer is a BILLIONAIRE,
    with all of her work. The HP movies have started way back when,
    even BEFORE Stephanie got the idea for Twilight. Therefore,
    HP is making more than the Twilight films. And now with the
    last two movies on their way. HP is going to earn even more
    money and along with the theme park in Universal, that's even
    MORE money. So, HP is making way more than Twilight.

    <3
    I'm sorry but I have to defend HP. Hehe. x]
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:46 pm

    well, depending on how many people are twi-hards, i'd say no m'dear but we all have our opinions and i respect yours
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by claire on Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:51 pm

    oh please, m'dear, all of the twi-hards are either 12-year-olds who spend their days staring at jacob's (enhanced) abs, or 59-year-olds who are convinced that edward is "the one" and not just some glitter-covered sparkly man in a book.
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:53 pm

    edward is the best guy in world, hairy potter, how many years of school does he really need?
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by claire on Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:56 pm

    oh and as of march 2010, forbes estimated j.k.r.'s net worth to be 1 billion.
    that's right. ONE BILLION DOLLARS. $1,000,000,000.

    smeyer's annual earnings are about 50 million. a lot, but not even comparable to rowling.
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by claire on Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:57 pm

    OH MY GOD.

    edward is the best guy in the world?


    okay.

    i'm not even going to say anything.
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by ibelieveinfairies on Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:58 pm

    Um, Edward is NOT the best guy in the world.
    And HP, if you actually paid attention to what the story is about,
    then you'd know that he started attending Hogwarts when he was young
    kid. And you'd know that these last two movies are of him GRADUATING
    from Hogwarts and his life after Hogwarts. But apparently, you seem
    to be one of those twelve-yr. olds whose obsesssed with, as Claire puts
    it Jacob's (enhanced) abs and you probably think that Edward is "the one".
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by amber- on Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:58 pm

    c wrote:edward is the best guy in world, hairy potter, how many years of school does he really need?

    That's rich when you're attempting to defend a guy who has graduated from high school more times than anyone bothers to count.
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by AshleyBrooke on Mon Aug 09, 2010 5:55 pm

    the twilight series was okayish..like to read when bored. But it was very predictable! and the movies arent they good because it looks so fake, it bothers me!
    HP is amazing! not predictable at all, theres no competion there....HP wins hands down.
    (and its very obvious that JK makes way more money.)
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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by Selina on Mon Aug 09, 2010 11:39 pm

    So, HP is the best series in the world. And we're not just saying that, it's been proven by its record-breaking sales.

    But aside from that, I have to agree with Claire. Les worked hard on her one-shot & coding. And to just take it all (even with credits) is unacceptable. And I know you’re already getting a hard time because of all of this, but seriously! Did you think that you’d get away with it?

    I just wanted to defend Les here. But I can see where you’re coming from as well. Les made an epic storyline and you wanted to continue it… But I think you should’ve asked her. That’s all.

    And Harry Potter rules.

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    Re: Thinking of You

    Post by Morgayne on Mon Aug 09, 2010 11:45 pm

    Twilight can't even compare to HP
    it has so many plot holes, it's ridiculous
    haha, just throwing that out there

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