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    flightless

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Sat Jan 08, 2011 1:38 pm

    A/N; This is my first vampire story so I don't know if it'll come out right. It's going to be a mix of Twilight and Vampire Academy because those are my two favorite vampire books. I promise to write on this as much as I can and please comment! Enjoy!



    Flightless



    Ah, distinctly I remember it was in the bleak December,
    And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor.
    Eagerly I wished the morrow; - vainly I had sought to borrow
    From my books surcease of sorrow - sorrow for the lost Lenore -
    For the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels named Lenore -
    Nameless here for evermore.


    -Edgar Allen Poe
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    Re: flightless[three]

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Sat Jan 08, 2011 1:39 pm


    Contents;

    one
    two
    three



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    Re: flightless[three]

    Post by Lexi on Sat Jan 08, 2011 7:10 pm

    nice use of "the raven"
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    Post by caitlynn<3 on Sun Jan 09, 2011 2:30 am

    Chapter One


    "I'm back," I whispered to myself. The Academy hadn't changed, it still had red bricks with dark green ivy climbing on it, still had the giant wrought iron fence that seemed impenetrable, teens with pale skin walking through the dark to their next class. I stood there, with my suitcase watching everybody, watching my old life.
    "Rose Grigori?" a man asked. "I'm here to take you to Headmistress Simpson." I stared at him and walked with my eyes dull and my spirit broken. They caught me. I was a special vamp, half mortal vampire, half immortal and the officials watched me more than others because I was the only Drangoni, a half-half, left. We turned the corner and the man held the door open for me. The room was stuffy, with dark red walls, a black carpet, and a dark oak wood desk where Headmistress Simpson sat.
    "Good night to you Ms. Grigori," she said while taking off her reading glasses. "Good to see you again."
    "You too," I lied.
    "Its nice to know our guardians can capture someone like you, so quick and powerful as you are." I didn't know why she was complimenting me, when before she used to say what a dissapointment I was.
    "Headmistress, can I got to my room? I'm tired from the trip."
    "Yes, your schedule is in your room and Mr.Thornson here will show you to it."
    "Thank you," I said and walked out of there.

    When I was walking back all the mortal vamp teens stared at me. I was grateful when I could lie in privacy of my own room. That was when the tears started flowing. I belived I could live a life when I was normal, not a vampire. Where I could go to highschool and learn about U.S. History, not Slavic Art. That fantasy was now like a bubble that has just been popped. I was perfect in my little enviroment until someone forced me out of it. I peeled off my clothes and took a shower. In the mirror I could see the straight scar from the blade of the Shadow warrior, slim, but still there, gleaming in the light. Why couldn't I just be normal?


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    Post by caitlynn<3 on Sun Jan 09, 2011 4:59 am

    Chapter Two


    When I woke up at 5:30 p.m., there was a creamy white envelope on my comforter with Ms. Rose Grigori scrawled in loopy handwriting on the front. I took a mintue to reasure myself I was out of a dream state and then took up the envelope in my hands and tore it open.

    Dear Ms.Grigori,
    There is a situation that has just come up and shall be
    immediately delt with. You are excused for your classes
    of the day and your training sessions. Eat breakfast in
    the dining hall then make your way to the Board Room.

    -Headmistress Julie Simpson

    I wondered what this 'situation' was and why I was intertwined with it. I quickly dressed in a sweater, jeans, and sneakers and took quick strides to the dining hall where I went to the private room where I could feed off one of the willing humans who were addicted to vampires bites. I sunk my teeth in and the lady let out a moan of pleasure, their perferred high. It was disgusting how much they enjoyed it, but the blood pulsing through me felt so good that I had to go through it. I took one last gulp, with her last gurgle of pleasure, and slipped my fangs out of her flesh.

    When I got to the Board Room, I was surprised when I opened the large oak door. All the members were there, with the four vampires that were sort of royals, the group last time I saw them they told me I was part of.
    "Hello Ms.Grigori," the Headmistress said.
    "Why am I here?" I asked.
    "There's going to be a war."
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    Re: flightless[three]

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Sun Jan 09, 2011 5:01 am

    comments, anyone?
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    Post by gossip lover on Sun Jan 09, 2011 6:48 am

    This is quite good. Contnue or else.

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    Post by IZZY on Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:49 am

    Lexi wrote:nice use of "the raven"

    ^I really liked that, too!


    I normally am not much of a vampirical reader, but I like this:)
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    Re: flightless[three]

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Sun Jan 09, 2011 5:33 pm

    thanks Smile will post next chapter soon!
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    Post by caitlynn<3 on Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:54 pm

    Chapter Three

    "What?!" I asked, practically yelled. "That's absurd!"
    "It's not when the immortal army is sending messages saying they are willing and wanting to come kill every mortal vampire here," Headmistress said.
    I had cold expression on my face. That meant that my father had completely slid into the immortal's leader position. He was a mortal vamp when he married my mom, but before they conceived me, an immortal injected his venom into him to make a powerful new vampire and to create a new half-blood. Then, my father had fled with the immortal and they took him as their new leader, because since he was a royal that would disrupt the mortal vampires world. When my mother had me, she died from some mysetrious illness, and I was left in the care of the mortal royals. My father sent a immortal to kidnapp me, but by that time I was eight and could kick a regular immortal's ass.
    "I can't believe it." I said. It felt as if someone knocked the air out of me.
    "And you Ms. Grigori are te most important piece of this puzzle."
    "Why?"
    "Because the immortals are much stronger than us, but we have magic to even it out. You have both and seeing you on the battle field may make your father give up," the Headmistress said.
    "I don't know," I blurted out.

    When I stopped crying, I walked to the gym to have a fighting session with Mr.Dimkov. He and I dueled hand to hand and that sort of let out all the anger building up in me.
    "Woah, you're really good today," Dimkov said.
    I smiled and then the door burst open.
    A boy with thick messy black hair and icy blue eyes came in.
    "Hello," he said, his fangs showing out of his pink lips.
    "Rose," Dimkov said. "Meet Kieran."
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    Re: flightless[three]

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Mon Jan 10, 2011 11:37 pm

    caitlynn wrote:comments, anyone?

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    Re: flightless[three]

    Post by Lexi on Sat Jan 15, 2011 11:31 pm

    Good!
    Moved too fast though...
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    Re: flightless[three]

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:03 pm

    i think im going to start it over...
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    Re: flightless[three]

    Post by AshleyBrooke on Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:05 pm


    Nooo don't, its good

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    Re: flightless[three]

    Post by Lexi on Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:08 am

    No don't start over..
    I noticed that you do it a lot...
    Instead, just slow the rest down
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    Re: flightless[three]

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Tue Jan 18, 2011 9:25 pm

    i think i am, cause i want to elaborate more and i *yeaaaaa* Smile
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    Re: flightless[three]

    Post by AshleyBrooke on Tue Jan 18, 2011 9:52 pm


    You can just edit your posts on here.
    Because like Lexi said you do tend to make multiple boards of the same thing.
    You had like five *believe boards, and then a contest board.


    P.S.- When are we going to start our story? I got on last Wednesday like you asked, and you weren't on.
    I thought about just going ahead and making the board myself, but since the last time we attempted to make a story together, I made the board. So I thought it was your turn.

    (And also I think we should call it "ABC Productions" Hahah! Like Ashley Brooke, Caitlynn? I thought it was cute!!)
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    Re: flightless[three]

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Tue Jan 18, 2011 9:54 pm

    im making it as we speak but i cant find a really good photo...
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    Post by AshleyBrooke on Tue Jan 18, 2011 9:56 pm


    PM me, I want to make sure you get the descriptions right, and I MIGHT have a picture...

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