Obsessed by a Fairytale

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    Morgayne

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    Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by Morgayne on Tue Jun 01, 2010 4:59 pm




    OBSESSEDby a
    fairytale





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    Sabra lightly traces the bruise on her arm. It barely hurts to touch anymore and has turned a nasty shade of yellowing green. That’s good though, it means it’s healing. She tucks a piece of dark hair behind her ear and glances at her phone, sighing. Ten to nine.
    “Sabra?” A disembodied voice floats down the hallway. A moment later, Keiran pokes his head into the room and gives her a breathtaking smile. His green eyes are dancing and his ink black hair is tousled to perfection. Sabra grins, wondering how she could be so lucky as to have him. His smile falters as he takes her in and Sabra’s breathe catches in her throat.
    “Something wrong?” She asks airily, instinctively clenching her entire body at the sight of his expression.
    “Uh, aren’t you going to get dressed? We’re leaving soon.”
    “I am dressed.” Sabra says, trying to force a lightness into her voice, to keep it from quavering, at the very least. She gets off of the bed on shaking legs to show off her new dress. “How do I look?”
    Keiran raises his hand and Sabra flinches unconsciously, taking a small step back. Keiran’s eyes fill with pain.
    “Did you think I was going to hit you?”
    Sabra shakes her head unconvincingly. “Of course not.”
    Keiran crosses the space between them in a few strides and takes her into his arms. He leans close, his breathe hot in her ear.
    “I would never hurt you.” He murmurs, stroking her hair. She closes her eyes in contentment as he kisses her neck softly. The smell of his cologne is intoxicating and she fills her lungs with it, unable to imagine a more perfect moment. Lost in her small, perfect haven, Sabra almost misses his next word, spoken in the lightest feather of a breathe. “Again.”




    I couldn't resist haha Smile Comments for motivation?
    /I want to name my kids Sabra and Keiran. I think they're such pretty, unique names, so I'm trying them out on my characters. What do you think?
    Oh and, as for the name, it's from a quote I found that I really like because it's a good description of my current mindset:
    “Obsessed by a fairytale, we spend our lives searching for a magic door and a lost kingdom of peace.”
    That and I love fairytales.


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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by Morgayne on Tue Jun 01, 2010 4:59 pm

    saved
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by sb on Tue Jun 01, 2010 6:31 pm

    Love.
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by Morgayne on Tue Jun 01, 2010 6:32 pm

    thanks!
    can't seem to start chapter one though
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by Lucius on Tue Jun 01, 2010 6:51 pm

    looks amazing!
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by Morgayne on Tue Jun 01, 2010 6:51 pm

    thanks <3
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by allie on Tue Jun 01, 2010 6:52 pm

    ooh
    this seems really good! xD
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by Braelyn. on Wed Jun 02, 2010 6:02 am

    morgayne wrote:thanks!
    can't seem to start chapter one though

    I know how that feels.
    Like I wrote an abuse story,
    and really;
    they make really great one shots,
    but it's hard to make the story out of them!
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by allee<3 on Wed Jun 02, 2010 11:03 am

    Good (:
    Hurry and start! (:
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by umber;; on Fri Aug 20, 2010 2:42 pm

    why isnt this being updated?
    i love it!
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by courtneyluvsya:) on Fri Aug 20, 2010 8:50 pm

    I WANTETH MORETH!!!
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Thu Sep 30, 2010 11:58 pm

    continue person I enjoy sucking up to.!
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Thu Sep 30, 2010 11:59 pm

    what the fuck?
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Fri Oct 01, 2010 12:00 am

    person I enjoy sucking up to. person I enjoy sucking up to. person I enjoy sucking up to. person I enjoy sucking up to.
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by erika! on Sat Oct 02, 2010 12:21 am

    love this!
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Sat Oct 02, 2010 2:42 am

    continue or else ill use your codng (can i pweese person I enjoy sucking up to.?)
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by Morgayne on Fri Oct 15, 2010 7:08 pm

    @#&$*(@(
    this story is so hard to continue Sad
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    Re: Obsessed by a Fairytale

    Post by caitlynn<3 on Mon Nov 01, 2010 10:56 pm

    Morgayne wrote:@#&$*(@(
    this story is so hard to continue Sad

    can i try to?

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