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    tibby
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    Post by tibby Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:05 am

    She smoothed down her summer dress and looked down at her sandals. She walked into the party and smiled at the many people she knew. Her ex boyfriend was there, but she didn't care. She had no regrets. "Hi Henry." She smiled. "Hello Lucy." He nodded. She flounced away, not even thinking about the fact that he hardly made eye contact with her. "Lucy!" Ben called and Lucy beamed, walking over to him. "Hey." She smiled, enveloping him in a hug. He hugged her tightly, but set her down all too quickly. An hour later and a few drinks into the party, Ben and Lucy were standing by the wall. Neither of them noticed the fact that Henry was watching. Ben leaned in and kissed her perfectly pink lips, her blonde hair falling over her shoulder. "Hey!" Henry shouted and pushed Ben. "What the hell man?" Ben asked, turning on Henry. "Henry!" Lucy squealed. "Get away from her." Henry took a step at Ben. "Henry." Lucy repeated, but he was ignoring her. "Jake!" She called out. Jake looked in her direction. "How many drinks did he have?" Lucy asked, trying to keep her voice in check. "I dunno. A few beers." Jake shrugged and turned back to Kayla. Ben was trying to talk Henry down. "Henry." She stepped in between the two of them just as Henry went to take a blow at Ben. It hit her in the jaw. She fell to the floor, crying out in pain. "Lucy!" Ben shouted. "Aw shit Luce." Henry fell to his knees. "I'm fine." Lucy rubbed her jaw, her eyes welling up. "Lucy," Henry started. "I think it would be best if you just left." Lucy whispered and Henry stiffened, walking away. Lucy walked away from Ben and found Carter, her brother, and left, not wanting anyone to ask any questions or start anything. "Are you okay?" Carter asked her. And for the first time in two years, he heard the answer, "No."

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    Post by Morgayne Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:11 pm

    wait, this is amazing
    one short or not, continue
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    Post by amber- Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:18 pm

    What Morgs said:: continue. (please) :]
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    Post by Lee Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:42 pm

    ahh love this (:
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    Post by tibby Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:26 pm

    haha are you serious?!
    this was just blah ahah
    but i'll try to continue if you want!
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    Post by Morgayne Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:26 pm

    definitely Smile
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    Post by tibby Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:47 pm

    Lucy rubbed her thumb over her chin, wincing at the pain. Her hair was up in a bun, she was in a loose V-neck tee and had her brother's old boxers on. "Carter!" She called, peering in the mirror. She could hear him padding across the tile floor and coming into the bathroom. "Hey." He grabbed her face softly, lifting it closer to the light. After a few moments of inspection, he gave her his verdict. "Definitely a bruiser. He was going for the knockout." Carter said, letting go of her face. "Shit." Lucy muttered, squeezing her eyes shut. "Hey." Carter said, pulling her in for a hug. She loved her older brother, he was like her best friend. They did almost everything together. Some people might think that was weird, since he was a year older, but they were with the same crowds and just happened to be related. "I'm going to bed." Lucy said, her words muffled in his tee shirt. "Okay." He let her go, and watched her slid into her bedroom. She picked up her phone where she had 3 missed calls, and 17 text messages. She could only imagine what they said. Sighing, she turned her phone off, and crawled into bed. She turned on her TV and turned it to Real World, barely watching it as her mind drifted back to the fight. Why would Henry do that? God. She heard tapping at her window. She got up and walked over quickly, closing the space between her and the window in a matter of seconds. She saw Ben standing down in the yard below her. She pulled open her window. "What are you doing here?" She called down. Ben grinned up at her, "Making sure you were alive." Lucy smiled and rolled her eyes. "Well, I'm living." She breathed a slight laugh that made her jaw twinge. Her arm went to grab her jaw, but a part of her knew that he would make a big deal, and go after Henry. "Oh Rapunzel Rapunzel, let down your hair!" He laughed, a big booming laughed. "I'm afraid I can't do that, Charming." She giggled. "At least take this from me, and you can go to bed." Ben smiled. "Fine." She blushed, and loped down the stairs, opening the front door where he was waiting. "Here." He handed her a red box, and wrapped his arms around her, making sure to not brush her jaw. He kissed her lightly and ran out the door, jumping into his car. "Thank you!" She called. "Don't worry about it." He winked and drove away. She closed and locked the door behind her, walking up the stairs slowly, staring intently at the box. She crawled on top of her bed and opened it, seeing a scrawled note on top of it. don't let what happened tonight ruin everything that we might have. It was on top of chocolates. She blushed furiously and set the box down, smiling. Her heart fluttered, and her eyelids drooped drowsily, the pain medicine kicking in. "Who was it?" Carter came in the door. "Ben." She replied sleepily. He said something that she couldn't hear. He kissed her forehead, and closed the door behind her, and she drifted off in medicine induced sleep.
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    Post by tibby Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:47 pm

    not taht good :/
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    Post by Morgayne Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:52 pm

    Carter and Ben sound amazing
    moree Smile
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    Post by charmischelsea Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:53 pm

    whoaa, okay. first part was great! about to read the 2nd part!!
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    Post by charmischelsea Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:56 pm

    WOW! okay so part two was really good too! Your an amazzzzinngggwriter!
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    Post by tibby Tue Jun 22, 2010 3:13 pm

    hahha wow, im flattered!
    thank you<3

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