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    Regret

    Post by Kathy on Sun Aug 08, 2010 1:39 am


    “I love you.” If I hadn’t actually seen the lips mouth the words,
    I would never have believe this to be happening. Him. Loving me.
    Him.It had to be a dream, but what happened earlier that night
    was proof it wasn’t. What happens next is something I will
    regret for the rest of my life.





    Characters-
    Kent Smith- Senior in high school


    Rachel- Sophmore in high school


    Bobby- Senior. Kents best friend


    Helena- Rachels best friend


    Sam- Rachels other best friend


    Tami- Rachels mom.



    ok, wellllp, i did a story like this on tco, almost exactly like this
    but i never finished it, and the writing sucked, but i really liked the story like
    sooooo enjoy Smile



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    Re: Regret

    Post by Kathy on Sun Aug 08, 2010 1:45 am

    “Rachel, the Smith’s are coming over any second now, please go clean off the coffee table now.” Rachels mother, Tami, nagged meto do. The Smiths where our very close family friends, they came over every Saturday, and more. Why we have to clean for them, I do not know.

    But I didn’t mind, I got to see my best friend that day. Kent. Well, he’s my best guy friend, who, in a sense, was my best friend. I could tell him anything and everything, and he would give me support and help me with everything. He’s the only one who knows that I write. My strict parents wouldn’t allow me to be a writer. It’s “too risky of a career choice.” Instead, after college, they are shipping me to law school. And my friends, if they knew I write, well, it’d be constant pestering about reading what I wrote, or calling me a nerd for doing so. I already get enough for being a book worm. Maybe thats why the kids at Grant High School are so dumb: they don’t read.


    After clearing the coffee table, my mother assigned me another task which was to tidy up my room. I ran upstairs and started transferring the clothes from the ground to the hamper when I heard a knock on the door. I turned around and there stood Kent, smiling slightly. His bright blue eyes caught my attention, then I noticed that he had cut his blonde hair. It was slightly shorter now, maybe three inches long. He was wearing a t-shirt from Red Hot Chili Peppers concert with jeans and vans. Casual. I looked down at my outfit, and flinched. Sweats and an oversized t-shirt. Way too casual. I heard him try to hide a laugh and my head shot up.
    “I had two minutes warning that you were coming.” I defended myself.
    He laughed and smiled his bright smile. “You look fine, don’t even sweat it.”
    I couldn’t help but feel comfortable around him, even if i was still wearing pajamas. I shoved him out the door to my room so I could change into something presentable to the rest of his family. I chose a striped short sleeved sweater and jeans, with no shoes. We were in my home, there’s no need for shoes.
    I opened the door and saw him leaning against the wall to my right.
    “You know you take forever to change? And you think out loud. I heard you saying ‘stripped sweater or pink v-neck?’” He teased.
    “It shows intelligence.” I smirked and walked passed him towards downstairs, he followed behind.

    It was about an hour of mingling when decided it was time to eat. After lunch, Kent and I went up to my room like we do every time they come over. That’s when we talk and he reads my stories.
    I opened my newest story on my computer, and he sat down to read it. It was a love story between Anabeth and Michael. Also known as Rachel and Kent. Yes, little did Kent know, I was in love with him. Have been for a while, just realized it last week. The way I can talk to him, the way he listens, he’s just perfect.
    “Wow, Rachel, this is amazing.” Kent complimented. I blushed.
    “Thanks.” I smiled.
    “Whose the guy based off of? It’s so obvious Anabeth is you, now whose the guy?” He asked.
    You.
    “Oh, nobody, really.” I lied.
    He seemed to believe it, because he didn’t ask again.
    “It seriously is amazing.” He looked up, and we made eye contact and we held it there. He started inching towards my face, and I couldn’t breathe. Closer and closer he came, this had to be a dream. He was inches away.
    “Kent time to go!” We heard his mother call.
    “See you later.” He whispered, and then left.
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    Re: Regret

    Post by Kathy on Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:02 am

    is there something wrong with my story guys?
    I'm getting views but no comments, it makes me feel like you guys don't like it haha
    give me some feedback, it's my first time writing, really.
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    Re: Regret

    Post by Morgayne on Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:16 am

    awww I looove it <3
    I'm so happy I get to read your writing
    more?(:
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    Re: Regret

    Post by Kathy on Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:36 am

    damn that pictures been deleted Surprised



    and awee, thanks <3
    haha, i fail at writing, don't expect much greatness.
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    Re: Regret

    Post by sof,or something on Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:44 am

    I love it!
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    Re: Regret

    Post by Kathy on Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:50 am

    awe, tahnk youuu<3
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    Re: Regret

    Post by Rachh<3 on Sun Aug 08, 2010 4:37 pm

    absolutely love(: post more soon!
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    Re: Regret

    Post by LaurenElizabeth on Mon Aug 09, 2010 1:19 am

    I love this:) write more soon pleasse!!!
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    Re: Regret

    Post by amber- on Mon Aug 09, 2010 1:29 am

    Ahhh of course he has to leave right then.
    I like this, T. Riddle!!(:

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