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    Post by caitlynn<3 Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:06 pm




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    This is based on the game, Kingdom Hearts. I loved the plot of the game, so I'm going to make a story out of it.

    Rose has always lived a life waiting for her brother, Sora, to come back. So, when they pronounce him dead, she goes into shock mode and runs away from her mom. Untill she meets someone that saw her brother that day, four years ago...



    Chapters;


    One
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    Post by caitlynn<3 Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:36 pm

    Chapter One



    I finally dropped my book down and stared out the window. How many years had it been since her twin brother, Sora, had gone missing? I remember the last night I saw him, on the island we all hung out on, him saying he was told by these voices that he had to go somewhere. We went home and then Mom called him to dinner. After a while of yelling, I ran upstairs to get his butt down, but he was gone. I remembered that night like it was yesterday. I then put my book down on the desk, and went downstairs. I ran to the shed were I stashed my bike. I was going to go to the island to hang out with the guys I had been hanging out with since I was a toddler. I pedaled over there as fast as I could and then dove into the water. After about thirty seconds of swimming, I landed on the shore. I ran up the ladder to the deck where Titus and Milio always dueled together with wooden swords.
    "Hey, guys!" I yelled to where they were fighting now.
    "Uhh, hey Rose," Titus strted to get red. I blushed.
    "He-eh-ey," Milio greeted me.
    "Hey, can I join in?" I asked. I knew they would let me, after they said I was a girl and couldn't.
    "But you might get hurt against one of us." Milio replied.
    "Do you mean youmight get hurt?" I tilted my head and batted my lashes.
    "Fine,but don't tell me that I didn't warn you."

    After about five minutes, I whooped both of them.
    "Oops, I think I only broke a sweat," I said while I fake-pouted.
    The boys lay on the wooden floor of the deck, each with a bottle of water and several bandages on their feet, legs, hands, arms, and cheeks. Then, I saw something from the corner of my eye. A dark cloud was foming above part of the island, it looked like the same cloud that I saw the night my brother dissapeared.
    "Hey, dudes, I'm going somewhere, see you in a bit." They both nodded.
    I jumped over the edge of the deck, and landed on the sand. Running in sand was almost as hard as running in water, but I got to the part of the island where the cloud was over in record time. There was a man in a black cloak standing there.
    "Hello?" I yelled. "Are you lost?"
    "Hello, little girl." The man was spooky looking.
    "Who are you?"
    "I am the ma who saw your brother last in this world." He smiled.
    I gasped. "Please, tell me where he is!!!" I screeched.
    "I'll give you this, to find your silly little brother."
    He held out a giant key.
    "What am I supposed to do with an oversized key?" I stomped my foot.
    "Its a keyblade, and you are the chosen one." He put down the, keyblade, turned around, and dissapeared into the black cloud.
    "Hey, heyyy!" I screamed and then I was sucked into the cloud also.
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    Post by Caseydillax33 Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:28 pm

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    Post by caitlynn<3 Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:59 pm

    thank you, and i thought nobody on RV would like the game.....i am addicted to it. Smile

    we are such soul sistahs
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    Post by caitlynn<3 Tue Aug 17, 2010 3:16 pm

    Chapter Two



    It was a while before I could open my eyes again. I was in this place. There were stone walls everywhere and there were ducks, DUCKS, in t-shirts and baseball caps. The keyblade was still in my palm. Gosh, I wish this thing would go away. And then it poofed away. I walked around for a bit, until I found a boy, with spiky blonde hair and a girl with brown pigtails and asked them, “Where am I?”
    “You’re in Hollow Baston,” the girl said and smiled. The boy stayed silent.
    “Oh,” I replied.
    “Are you not from around here?” the girl asked.
    “Yeah, but you wouldn’t believe my story.”
    “Oh, we’ve had bunches of weird stories. By the way, have we ever met? You look like someone I know, but I can’t remember.”
    I told her the story.
    “Why don’t you come to Merlin’s house and you can have a cup of tea and tell him?”
    “Okay,” I replied.


    I walked into the house. An old man was sitting by a fire, drinking out of a tea cup.
    “Here’s the new energy you sensed,” the boy finally spoke.
    “Oh, I new you would be here soon!” He clapped his hands. “Tell me the story of how you got here.”
    I told him.
    “And wait!” I exclaimed. “He gave me this over-sized key, and said I was chosen.”
    The boy and girl gasped. I looked at them. Was something wrong?
    “No, nothing is wrong, but I need you to show me that key.”
    “Oh, it sorta vanished,” I said.
    “Then hold out your hand and think of it.”
    “Okay.” I held out my hand. Keyblade, come to me…

    And there it was.

    Then the little black things appeared.

    “You have to fight them with the keyblade,” the man grabbed my hand.
    “I don’t know how!” I screamed.
    “Just use it as a sword!”
    I ran out of the room and the black things followed.

    Use it as a sword. Use it as a sword. Use it as a sword.

    I slashed them and they disappeared, but as those disappeared, a giant one appeared.
    “Help!!!!” I screamed.
    Then a boy with the same spiked brown hair as my brother came out with another keyblade and destroyed it. When he turned around I saw who it was.
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    Post by Caseydillax33 Tue Aug 17, 2010 9:23 pm

    haha yesh xD
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