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    Post by nants Thu Feb 03, 2011 2:11 pm

    Knock, knock.
    It’s 11:30 at night, mom and dad must be back from their dinner party.
    I open the door and a wave of cold hair hits me.
    It’s Rob.
    I squint trying to make out his face in the misty air, and dark night.
    Blood.
    I grab his arm and pull him in, leading him to the couch, and he sinks in it with ease. I walk into the kitchen and grab the first aid kit, my mind blank, the only thoughts having to do with Rob.
    “Looking good,” He croaks, smirking as he sweeps me a look up and down. I’m in glasses, my hair piled at the top in a tangled bun, and I’m swearing my favorite pajamas with Spongebob on them.
    “Shut up.” I whisper, as I sit down next to him to scan his injuries.
    He has a bad gash at the top of his eyebrow, and his lip is busted open.
    I gently touch my hand to his cut, and he winces.
    “What did he do this time?” I ask, as I try and clean up his wounds.
    “He came home drunk again. He wanted money. I said no, I wasn’t going to give him any. All he was going to do was blow it all off for more beer, and besides. I was saving up that money for your birthday.” He replies, scrunching up his face with pain, as I try to bandage up his cuts.
    I stop and stare, looking at my bestfriend of seven years.
    “You’re an idiot,” I whisper, but still lean over to give him a kiss on the cheek.
    “Mm, that almost makes everything better,” He says with that stupid, adorable grin on his face. I push him away gently, laughing.
    This wasn’t the first time Rob’s dad had hit him, I was used to him showing up atleast once a month with a bad cut, or bloody nose at my place in the middle of the night.
    “Anna?” He says all of a sudden.
    I look up at him, and even in the dark I can see the glint of his bright, blue eyes.
    “Thank you,” He whispers as he rests his head upon my chest, his eyes getting droopy.
    I can feel his chest falling up and down, and a soft snore fills my ears.
    “You’re welcome. Please don’t do something like that ever again for me, I would hate to see you get hurt. I love you, afterall,” I whisper, although I’m aware he’s already asleep now, lost in dreamland.






    Oh look here, I actually attempted to write today!
    It's very bad, I'm aware, but I was in a writing mood. I guess I'll be taking up
    writing again, now? Suggestions and comments would be wonderful!
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    Post by kel$ey Thu Feb 03, 2011 2:18 pm

    I really like this!
    I can seriously picture that whole thing in my head.
    <3
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    Post by caitlynn<3 Thu Feb 03, 2011 3:40 pm

    love it!
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    Post by nants Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:05 pm

    Thank you guys!
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    Post by Lexi Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:42 pm

    Haha!! I love this!!!! Partly because the guy I like name is Rob and mostly because you are a super writer
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    Post by nants Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:44 pm

    Lexi, thank you so much, that means a lot!
    And really? I just sort of come up with the name, popped into my mind, hahah!
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    Post by Lexi Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:46 pm

    Yes!!

    I was like "Woah! That's really good."

    And you're wayyyy better than me... I'm better at writing plays anyways... I hate detail and love talking...
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    Post by nants Thu Feb 03, 2011 6:23 pm

    Thank you!!
    And I'm sure you're a really good writer.
    PM me one of your pieces?

    I'm terrible at plays, I just can't do them well. :P
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    Post by Lexi Thu Feb 03, 2011 6:32 pm

    I haven't written a play, but I write stories, so I'll email it to you...
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    Post by amber- Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:41 pm

    Awe, I had this little scene rolling in my head the whole time reading this. If you do start writing again, I can't wait to see more. =)
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    Post by nants Tue Feb 08, 2011 12:13 am

    Thank you, Amber! Smile
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    Post by tibby Tue Feb 08, 2011 12:34 am

    aw i love this! id love it if you continued(:
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    Post by nants Tue Feb 08, 2011 8:01 pm

    Thank you so much Tibby!

    I might just start it into a story, in that case. :)
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    Post by Lexi Tue Feb 08, 2011 9:52 pm

    You should!!

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