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    madi of suburbia
    madi of suburbia
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    Post by madi of suburbia Thu Aug 26, 2010 8:20 pm


    little baby
    a poem

    You haven't looked at me
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa little baby

    you haven't done a thing
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa little baby

    But your daddy has the power
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa little baby

    and mommy is afraid
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa little baby

    so don't you worry
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa little baby

    i love you
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa little baby

    and the world is getting different
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa little baby

    and they take you away,
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa little baby

    before it's your time.


    mommy will never get to hold her
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa little baby

    because daddy told her to kill my

    little baby.


    the style of writing is based of Ellen Hopkins, who wrote Crank, Glass, Burned
    and Impulse (I just finished Impulse, and I am starting Glass). Really sad. If
    you guys think it's a little too intense, I'll put Viewer Discrition Advised
    at the top. Other than that, please give some feedback!



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    shea f. babyy <3
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    Post by shea f. babyy <3 Thu Aug 26, 2010 8:38 pm

    aww sadd:(
    but really good.:]
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    madi of suburbia
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    Post by madi of suburbia Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:05 pm

    thanks shea!
    yeah, its really sad:/
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    Post by madi of suburbia Fri Aug 27, 2010 11:08 pm

    b.ump?<33
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    Post by caitlynn<3 Sat Sep 04, 2010 2:41 pm

    so sad...but good!
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    Post by IZZY Sat Sep 04, 2010 6:54 pm

    it's heartbreaking...very powerful

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    Post by amber- Sat Sep 04, 2010 7:43 pm

    Oh wow this is so strong and sad.
    I like the writing style!
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    Post by madi of suburbia Sat Sep 04, 2010 7:53 pm

    thanks guys!
    it really means alot:)
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