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    Post by caitlynn<3 Wed Oct 20, 2010 9:34 pm






    LOVINGthe pieces of
    yourlostsoul

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    Dead. Bullet through his heart. Blood caked on his pale lips, the lips I used to kiss a million times.
    His life was taken so simply, even though he was such an amazing person. I shed tears that day, the
    first in 10 years. He was the one thing I loved in this world, and it was taken away from me with the
    pull of a trigger. His clear blue eyes going blank. Your eyes go dark. After that, you see nothing good
    in this world. You are blind with the sting of death. He gave it all for me. He took a chance and took the
    fall for us. He gave his heart to me, and now I am alone. But, he's still here.




    . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

    A/N: this is inspired by "My Love" by Sia for Eclipse


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    Post by caitlynn<3 Wed Oct 20, 2010 9:35 pm

    chapters;
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    Post by caitlynn<3 Wed Oct 20, 2010 11:56 pm

    chapter one
    My black lace dress fell limp against my cold body. My lips parted to sob again, yet I couldn’t muster a word. Dried tears were on my pale, lifeless cheeks and my eyes were dull, lifeless. The rich blue-grey-green color that had been in them was probably lost forever. My hair was tied into a black silk bow and the raven black waves were probably the only part of my body that bounced.
    “I love your hair,” Daniel had said more than once, weaving his fingers through the shiny strands.
    Daniel.
    He was gone, and this was his funeral. Everyone was mournful, Daniel was the most lively person anyone knew. He would always laugh, and if you felt down, he was there for you. When I lost my parents, he would come to school everyday with a nice thing. Flowers, a homemade card, a kiss on my cheek. When I got foster parents he was the same, except the kiss on the cheek became a kiss on the lips. He was there at my lowest and highest and I remember that day when he told me something I will forever treasure.
    “Hey,” Daniel said, his cheeks blushed from the cold.
    “Hey,” I laughed.
    “Will you take a walk with me?”
    We walked to the farthest range in the park when he kissed me and said:
    “My world would be horrible if you weren’t here, you know?”
    I nodded.
    “I love you, Katarina.”
    I kissed him hard, our bodies intertwining.

    “Daniel wouldn’t want us to cry,” Mr.Finneas, Daniel’s uncle, said, jerking me back to reality.
    And that was all to make me start sobbing my life out again.
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