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    For The First Time (A one-shot by Caro)

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    Post by up Tue Jun 01, 2010 11:58 pm

    And She ran in her circles. And He ran in his circles. She rushed obliviously, as did He, each in their own dark, little worlds. Blind

    to everything, to anything. Work, drive, eat, work, drive, eat, and nothing else. He and She rushed, isolated from everything in their

    own pretty little patterns – ignorant, but hardly blissful. Then came the falls. And then came the real beginning. It was just another

    of those mornings, was it a Wednesday? A Friday? Does it matter? One of those carbon-copied mornings, on the way from the car

    to the office building came the first fall. A misplaced shoelace maybe? A groove in the pavement? Nevertheless, it was the first thing

    out of the ordinary for her in ages. Nevertheless, her pattern was interrupted for the first time, and She tripped. Falling, and falling,

    off balance, off schedule, slowly. And it was the most comfortable feeling She had experienced in an eternity, so She let herself float

    down, and just sat. There in the doorway of the same gargantuan office building she sat, as herds of people were arriving for the

    same day. She just sat for the first time, and everything sat still with her. Then came the second fall. It was bound to happen – a

    serendipitous stumble into fate. Because here He came, in the same daze, looking ahead, always looking ahead, as if nothing else

    would propel him forward. And over her He tripped. And then suddenly, there they were, sitting side by side, and She looked left

    towards him, and He looked right towards her. And they weren’t looking ahead, but they were finally looking forward for the first

    time. Their choices, their futures, tangible for the first time.


    And from there, everything seemed to happen for the first time, for the first time. He and She looked up and down and left and

    right and saw everything they saw. They never otherwise would have, if the other hadn’t been there. Not a second went

    unappreciated, and everything was light. She and He changed each other and watched each other change, and watched each other

    grow. He and She recognized that without that one moment, everything would still be the same. If the two of them hadn’t let life

    change them, life wouldn’t have changed. Most of all though, She and He realized that if everything were still the same, if She had

    never stumbled and He had never followed suit, You wouldn’t have ended up here. There would have been nothing to see, nothing

    to read, nothing to take note of. But it did happen, and for that, She, He, and we thank life, change, and everything that is new,

    because novelty is what makes life, life.
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    Post by cat♥ Wed Jun 02, 2010 12:04 am

    i. love. this.
    it's amazing, for lack of a more creative word. <3
    bravo!
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    Post by Lily Wed Jun 02, 2010 12:13 am

    I really like this.
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    Post by up Wed Jun 02, 2010 12:27 am

    Thanks you two!! It really means a lot Very Happy
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    Post by allee<3 Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:21 am

    Really creative!
    Love it! Its just...really good. (Since I can't find any adjectives to describe it)
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    Post by up Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:53 am

    thanks!!
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    Post by up Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:26 pm

    Very Happy Very Happy
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    Post by amber- Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:43 pm

    Uhmm, Caro? This was really, really, really, really good. It was like reading a poetry one-shot, if that makes any sense.
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    Post by madi of suburbia Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:47 pm

    wow. amazing, just amazing. gorgeous caro:)
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    Post by sb Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:54 pm

    Breathtaking in that simple, elegant way.
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    Post by up Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:21 pm

    AHH you guys are so so nice! Thank you!!!
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    Post by Braelyn. Thu Jun 03, 2010 5:00 am

    I really really enjoyed this piece.
    It reminded me of a movie like 500 Days of Summer for some reason.
    Like a visual of that sort of movie.
    Well done!
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    Post by up Thu Jun 03, 2010 11:26 am

    aww thank you!!!!!
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    Post by up Sat Jun 05, 2010 4:34 pm

    Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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    Post by BetsyisMiley(; Sat Jun 05, 2010 4:38 pm

    amazing !
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    Post by up Sat Jun 05, 2010 4:44 pm

    thanks!
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    Post by BetsyisMiley(; Sat Jun 05, 2010 4:44 pm

    of course!
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    Post by up Sun Jun 06, 2010 6:52 pm

    Very Happy Very Happy
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    Post by tibby Tue Jun 08, 2010 3:07 pm

    amazing!
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    Post by up Wed Jun 09, 2010 12:46 am

    thank you!!!
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    Post by rez Wed Jul 07, 2010 8:03 am

    that was beautiful. love your style of writing!

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